17A For Kid's Sake - Elevator Pitch II

My Second Elevator Pitch

I changed this elevator pitch by using my phone and without using a script since in an elevator, meeting up unintentionally with a great investor potential, you wouldn’t really be prepared. I did try to introduce myself this time (that was what I had seen in my feedback) and I noticed I did repeat myself, but I hoped that I got the point across that this could be great for children in many ways and that it would serve other uses too like older children, the elderly, etc. I didn’t go into too much detail about the product, because I would want to go over that with the investor potential at the next meeting.

In my first pitch, I wasn’t very energetic or enthusiastic about the product. I was just reading a script. I would really liked to have taken it outside next to a busy school or near a car for a more dynamic setting, but, I wasn’t able to this time. I would really like to have had more editing time with it, it's pretty choppy now to get it down close to 90 seconds. :-) Perhaps next time I can do all of these things.